Gotta remember that physics work differently underwater 
That reminds me of a time when I wrote a short role-playing story about one of my NWN characters. After writing my "masterpiece", I realized that I didn't take into account that it was winter time on the server. There was no snow on the ground, no rivers frozen over in my tale... live and learn, I guess.
WiZaRDuSS, I find that when I write from a character's perspective, you have to really see the world through their eyes. In fact, sometimes my mind lives inside the character while I write and I actually feel a bit emotionally drained depending on what they're going through.
That said, I'm still interested in the story... though I wish there was a little more character development.
As always, any thoughts on it are welcome, I write mainly for the readers, not for myself(not that much anyway).
I don't know what you mean exactly by those words. Are you saying that you're writing because some of us are expecting more chapters? I hope you'd be a little more selfish and write because you really want to, not because of some perceived obligation. Otherwise, what's the point? It's just your comment above coupled with forgetting about her being underwater makes me wonder.
